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pre-writing techniques

2012-01-31T12:41:00.000-08:00

as i've study about the pre writing techniques , it was divided into three (as far as i know) and it was ; WH question , mind mapping or clustering and brain storming .

i also learn that there were 3 things that was very important as a guidance to make a better introduction and they are :

the hook : it was designed to grab the reader attention immediately and made us want to read more on the essay topic .

transition : move the reader from the hook to the driving force of the essay

thesis : makes the contract with the reader about what we will discuss in other paragraph without telling about it but just giving the clue .

here are some example on how to write the introductory paragraph :

1. Personal examples

(LESBIAN)

on saturday,december 20, 2009, we met a pair of 'pengkid' at shopping complex, kuala lumpur.

one of them wore a tight t-shirt and jeans like a man and the other one wore a blouse.

sam, 20 years old girl who came from kedah,

became a 'pengkid' because she was raped by her boyfriend who was older than her.

from that point, she did not get any attention from her family.

futhermore, she had been influenced by her friends who had been through the same experience.

she came to kuala lumpur with a male character and her dressing as well as a guy looks alike.

she wanted to be a male because

she would understand female more than a male understand them and she also

did not want all girls out there to be cheated by guys.

sam life was full of bad experiences and she seemed to have no goals in her life.

nevertheless,few reason such as that can make a woman become a 'pengkid',

that is family problem, enviroment and the past experience.

2. Quotations

(example of quotation)

'as long as society is anti-gay, then it will seem like being gay is anti-social'. this thought was written by joseph francis. people can see someone personality regarding to the individual behaviour. futhermore, it will give a bad perception to them. when the society sees the odd thing like man with a man they will say that it was annoying. people will isolate them and think the negative perception about them. but they do not care about the society opinion about them. based on the statement above,there are many negative impacts of being a gay rather than positive one.

3. Facts or statistics
(transvestites among us)
According to the book, 'Men in dresses' by Vernon Coleman,...precise figures are difficult to obtain but my research shows that in an average week 100,00 in every 1,000,000 men dress-for some of the time-in something soft, silky or frilly. Often they just wear a camisole and panties underneath their male clothes. A growing number of men have discovered that putting on stockings and the frock is the quickest way to escape from the stressful responsibilities of being man.The statistics had showed the number of men who want to become women's has increasing among us in newspaper, radio, television and internet.There are many causes why men being women such as partners , biological, and media influences.

4. Rhetorical questions
have you ever heard about gender conversion? have you met someone who performed the gender conversion? how they perform the gender conversion. now in time, the gender conversion is famous among men and it has become widespread. they are many Asian's men perform the gender conversion in thailand. this has lead to many negatives effects to them.bad opinion from community, bring discrediton themselves and their family, and easy infection of bacteria are mostly the major for those who performed the gender conversion.

5. Current events
(gay issue)
the news about gay marriage between a malaysian, ariff alfian rosli and his lover, an irish man was reported on december 20th last year. it was a big shock to every malaysian's eyes and ears. it was embarrasing enough to know that he got married with his own sex and it was just unacceptable when he was spotted wearing malaysian tradisional apparel during the ceremony. in facts, ariff denies the accusation that claimed he had converted out of islam, he stressed that he were remain a muslim until the day he die even though he had strayed from islam by marrying his own sex.naturally all religion prevents their followers from getting involved in homosexual relationship. based on ariff's story, there are many negative impacts that gay marriage offers to the society, religion and country.

6. Contrast to the thesis statement
previously, gay marriage was not allowed in New York. It got a lot of resistance from every side. It consisted of few factors such as gay marriage will change the foundation of society as well as encouraged more guy couple to get marriage, In addition, it also against teh religion and no religion in this world allowed homosexuality.Gay marriage occurs when people get relationship problem and starts to hate different gender, They feel that the same gender is more in their shoes.There are many negative impacts why gay marriage is allowed now in New York as gay's advocate get the highest vote from the citizen, majority of them are homosexual and less legal relationship, as well as the government get strong protest from gay's communities.

7. Definition

(SHEMALE)

Shemale can be defined as men who have the same characteristic like a woman. These type of men love about fashion, cosmetic, hairstyle and many more. Moreover, they also get a good achievement in any field rather than women. They are very talented and creative to create a new things in the world of lifestyle. In addiction, some of them will try to be like a woman using surgery and medicine which is expensive. As a result this community give a bad reputation to our enviroment. Thus,some impacts have been recognized based on this situation such as disease problem, legal aspects and social problems.

CONCEPTUAL CLUES

2012-01-31T12:37:00.000-08:00

today we have learn about conceptual clues . well , it quite hard to me to explain it in specific about the given clues but i will try to , insyaallah .

we have play the game during our classes but no one the the real answer , i mean the right one .

dear miss zu , this game is quite difficult laaa :')

POEM I THINK I CAN

2012-01-31T12:35:00.000-08:00

WELL , I'VE SEARCHED FOR THE PAPER EVERYWHERE BUT STILL CAN'T FOUND IT :(

WILL WROTE THE POEM IN THIS BLOG LATER

movie review (127 hours)

2012-01-03T09:46:00.000-08:00

movie review
127 hours and reviewed by me =='

will , this story about Aaron Ralston and he is a mountain climber . it was based from the true story . he get trapped during his journey .
the story take place when aaron went for adventure alone and as i know , he didn't inform his family about his trip and he also didn't bring any communication device such a hand phone .

well , he think from doing that he can be safe without thinking about the impact . the story take places when his hand was stuck at the big stone . after trying to save his hand for 127 hours then he decided to cut it or he'll be death . he choose the live even without his hand .

well , when i saw he cut his own hand , i was about to scream ; aaaauuuuuwww ! haha :D in was horrible . but at last , he's save but without hand . he was regret on his own behaviour (not telling his family about the journey) . luckily , he's save and ALIVE.

verb and pronouns

2012-01-03T09:31:00.000-08:00

hye blog :)
here we meet again . HAHAHA
okay lahh . today i would like to talk about verb and pronouns . well , i've studied it in class just now .
okay lets start with nouns . well , a noun that names any person , place or thing is a common noun while a noun that names a particular person is a proper noun . to identify the proper noun , it will be start with capital latter such as Abu .

i also understand that if it was a singular nouns and end with S , X , CH or SH ; we need to put 'ES' at the end of the word .
example : lunch will become lunches

the collective noun is a committee . (well , i understand it but don't know how to explain it in word) =.='
if it plural , we need to put 'ES' at the end of the word .

LETS CONTINUE WITH PRONOUN

pronoun : I , you , we , they .
if it singular , we need to put 's' at the end of the word .
verb is an action which is involved the movement .
example (irregular) : eat -> ate -> eaten

http://www.writingcentre.uottawa.ca/hypergrammar/pronouns.html

http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/verb.htm

http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/verbs-what.htm

exhibition

2012-01-03T08:56:00.000-08:00

dear blog #aaauuwmmm HAHAAHA
lets talk about some exhibition . My Bel's lecturer ; Miss zu had give us a task . we need to perform that task at that day and our attendance will be taken after we finished that task . we need to went to some kind of exhibition and it was like club society exhibition . well , it be held at speaker's corner . i have been in there at 8 a.m but the exhibition start about 9 a.m . LOL ~,~
That exhibition will be from 12-14 December . I've went to BAHASA MANDARIN SOCIETY booth and they got a lot of antics and traditional thing in there such as tea set , old-fashioned cheongsam . they also got the brush for calligraphy and chopstick in there while i was like getting amused when see all those thing .

after that , i went to ARABIC LANGUAGE SOCIETY and WHOAAAA :O they also got the weird thing (for me) HAHA . i attracted with an EGYPT LANTERN . it was AWESOMEEE because in was in purple . well , purple is my favorite color EHEEE . they also got the TURKIS EYE PENDANT . that thing was like an amulet . they also exhibit shissha . Ohh i also had read about their culture in there which is different from ours .

lastly , i went to the ENGLISH SOCIETY BOOTH . well , not much of weird thing in there . they just put some story book such as fairytale and explain to us about the book . but what interesting in this booth , they got some activity that other society doesn't have such as face painting , draw a body tattoo (not the permanent one) and snap a picture with snow white .

after finished visiting all those booth , and taking some picture , we (me and my classmate) went to SL to meet Miss zu to prove to her that we've finished doing that given task and sign our own attendance .

bye ;)

Bel’s game

2012-01-03T08:28:00.000-08:00

HYE BLOGG :)
Miss me ? HAHA .
okayy ; today I would like to tell a story about my Bel’s activity and its like some kind of ‘game’ for me which is quite fun . it was an outdoor activity because we do it outside the class . Well , for me that game helped me to release my mind . sick off being in class for the whole day long -.-‘ lalalaaa~ BUT . . there's a lot of mosquito in there =.=' HAISHHH .

Well , in this activity, Miss zu had divided us into two group . one group will be the outer circle and the other one will be the inner one . then , miss zu give us the topic , we should talk about the given topic to our partner . but we need to talk the topic given in ENGLISH . haaaa , it quite horrible for me . something like DISASTER -.-‘ well , I’m gonna said that it was TERRIBLE since my English was damn bad (especially when I’m speak in that language) at the first place , I feel shy and afraid if I use the wrong word and who know maybe I speak it , the word might sound differently but I’ve already set in my mind ; it was for my own goodness . It became more WORST when the topic was about football . ERRGHH (not interested in it) lalalalaaa #just forget bout it^^

Miss zu often said ; give change a chance . this phrase had encourage me to start a new life and be brave if it was for my own goodness . As a student ; to gain knowledge and to make myself better , I should learn from mistake so that I won’t repeat it and know which is wrong and right .

okay bye (",)

THE REFLECTION

Bytheway , after several days we doing this activities , we have done another activity which is divided us 5 person in one group . well , we need to choose the p.ramlee movie and need to re-enact the movie . not the whole movie laaa . i mean the certain part in the movie .

well , i didn't watch the tan sri p.ramlee movies so i felt quite awkward at the first place . but luckily all my group member show me what to do and told me about the story . they also created the script for me and i felt very lucky to have the group member like them .

well , for me i like this activity because i quite funny when we be an audience and watch the people presented it . but when it comes to our turn ; fuhhhh ! nervous . but at least i enjoyed it :) well , i felt like a talented actor even my acting were definitely horrible .